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Script

First draft

This is the first draft of the script, written by Alice.

This is Lucy's copy of the script, which she has annotated for filming, as she is the cinematographer. There are notes for which camera angles and shots she wanted to use, and notes for when she and Alice edit it.

Alice wrote the script and gave it to the other members of the group to look over to make sure that the story/plot made sense.We then decided to send the first draft of the script around to the class so that they could annotate it and tell us if they understood the basis of the plot.After this we then gave it to the teachers to make sure that they also understood everything and found the script enjoyable from a adult perspective. Due to our target audience being teenagers we were interested if it would also appeal to them.Lucy annoted the script for camera angles (as said above) as she was in charge of the camera.Olivia also annotated the script by annalysing the dialogue to make sure that the speech was realistic and appeared natural as we want the thriller to appear as relaistic as possible.Also by having predictable dialogue we didnt want to take away from the action/thriler film.

Olivia's annotations

Class annotations

Final draft

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